' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' Death By Similie & Metaphor
D Dónall Dempsey
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Your kiss
was like a tsunami
such
intense
“intensity”
it made even my curls
curl
& my toes curl
as well.
Your caress
was like an avalanche
of such
immense feeling
my libido
(like a cartoon cat)
was left clinging
upside down
on the ceiling.
Your smile
was like...like
please please
no more similes.
Then you removed
your dress
and I felt yes
(yes)
unable to catch
my breath
as if I had been
metaphored to death.
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