Am I Any Good At Writing Poetry?

Can someone read my poem, please? Am I quite good or not! ? Of course, I've got uncertainties, Yes, they plague me a lot! And yet I've really done my best, I've even rhymed as well... Have I done well? Have I been blessed? If only I could tell! It's true, I'm biased, yes, indeed, I'd like another view... Who knows, together, we'll succeed? And yet, that's up to YOU! Could you invest a little time, Then comment if you would? I think my poem's quite sublime! In fact, I think it's good! But when I see what others write, Their eloquence and style, Quite suddenly my hope takes flight And then I lose my smile... So, be a dear and help me out, Bring comfort to my soul, Help me to overcome my doubt, Help me fulfill my role! Though I feel led to persevere, It's just I wonder how, I want someone to make it clear, Should I stop writing now? Or should I strive for greater things, Determined to the end? As if to write for lords and kings And not just for a friend? My heart stands ready either way, Yet feedback serves as proof... Should I still write another day? Be honest! Tell the truth! If no-one answers to my plea, I guess, I'll write no more... Good-bye to prose and poetry And all that these stand for... Denis Martindale, May 2016.