A Hillbilly Boy Named Santa (Limerick -1)
H Harindhar Reddy
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(Edited version of my First Limerick)
Yippee! Passion made Santa Singh silly,
he glanced at a nubile young filly
from Longtown in England -
his heart danced in dreamland -
But he didn't say a word to his Lilly.
Harindhar Reddy appreciates your read and suggesting.........
(It's 50th attempt. Ur advice or version is welcome - Thank U)
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