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Whether you agree or disagree
The poet may feel it not free
That may upset him for next poem
He may concentrate more on them
The theme does not change
The youth can not turn into old age
The poetry is such flow
Even zigzag may have to allow
The moon does not become sun
The stars can not come near soon
You try to sleep in night
In dreams you can not fight
So long it gives universal message
Make poet a happy person by comment on his page
Pick up good points for personal change
If that suits your temperamental phase
The poem must be given due respect
If not read here then pick up the comments
That might have been read somewhere
It may strengthen points here
The readers may know correctly
What other people think rightly
It may find now right evaluation
The poet may find now correct revelation
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