Did You Understand It?

L Lawrence S. Pertillar
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You've written something with several typographical errors. And I question the correctness of your language usage. Plus it had been written in mixed tenses. I read it more than once. And after the third reading it finally dawned on me, You may have done this intentionally. 'Did you understand it? What it was I tried to do? ' I'm not sure. 'How would you critique it? ' I don't know if I can. 'And you read it three times? ' At least. 'Why should I bother to correct it? If 'you' read something I wrote... THREE times? And you have never expressed any interest before? In anything I've ever done? Why should I correct it? This is the first time you and I have communicated, In years. Who knew... All it took was a few errors, To get you to give me what I have been wanting. Here... Read this! ' Your first and third lines rhyme. But the rest of it... Well, I think this is a bunch of garbage. 'Thank you. And all this time, You had me believing... You didn't care.'

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