Haiku Comments

(These are some of my comments on the haikus of other poets at PH slightly altered where needed in order to let them stand alone.) Cloud: The cloud is in haste It has to rain on the plains Hot thirsty terrains Peepholes: Questions start with why When, what and how – they all are Peepholes that describe In Orbit: I remain unsent Due to your gravity’s pull Planet in orbit Reality Of Life: I don’t want to leave But leave I must that is life Sunshine, there is cloud Carbon: We are made of dust Carbon therefore suits us best Silicon can hurt Pain: Forgetful we are Court pain again and again ‘Coz of ignorance Tequila: With salt on glass brim Tequila is simply great Hell with the liver Sensitive Throats: Even with hot drinks Ice is pretty dangerous Some sensitive throats Water: Two gases combine A magic liquid is born Blossoms of life bloom Bread: The bread is pretty Send me a loaf fast pretty Taste-buds are greedy Ladybug (not a haiku) : But why are they called bugs When enchant is all they do Unlike bugs and the lady of the house Who bug us without a cease? Poet (not a haiku) : Tell me of what ethereal wine you are drunk That so much poesy brims in your head Like glowing glow-worms without a cease Casting imagery day and night?