Went Deep Into The Fathomless

The second poetess good she is Sun is the centre stage of life...morning -dawn- evening twilight...the sun does rise- - it never sets... it's for ever rising....some where.The centre of our universe and also us.. is the Sun... we must converse...as the sun leads us from the distant hill...from where it emerges... till its zenith...... then it sets for us only...in our distant horizon... O poet you will be one day like the sun.... when poetry of great poets is being sung. Hopefully I will be along too... with you...ere the setting sun...in the distant horizon...poet well done You already are well sung! I am fascinated by the way you write. I have lived submerged in poetry all my life but have never encountered any Poet like yourself. You are refreshingly and genuinely different! In a very positive way. A POETESS SAYS ''You're deep and yet you flow How many more secrets do you know? Your first poem reminds me of the classic cult film Harold and Maude. It was bittersweet just like your wonderful poem. Your second poem reminds me of Unwritten Soul. Suffice it to say, your title says it all. 2.POET SAYS On a final note, I'm in total agreement with Sandra