Tanka 15,16 Mind-Body
S Savita Tyagi
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One Pointedness
Blessed is the mind
That moves across galaxies yet
To its point of light
Sole in its mortal body
Stays so blissfully aligned.
Robert Murray Smith's comment gave me the inspiration to write it in following way.
It depicts mind's another characteristic.
Tanka 16
Alertness.
Perplexes this mind
That moves across galaxies yet
To billion neurons
Lodged in its mortal body
Stays so blissfully aligned!
11.12.2017
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