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Dear Writer,
Congratulation for your 'Epical Novel'.
Your linguistic and literary skill beyond dispute;
You too write extremely good hand.
Yet to tell the truth, beg a pardon,
In your Novel have done a mistake,
In a word a great blunder.
The word ‘world' is wrongly used.
Rather can be said causeless, misuse...
In a sentence of time the word, ‘world' is not inevitable
You can easily drop it.
There would be no change of meaning.
Thank you.
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